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The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
#water #usage #san #diego #california #rest #world
The pie graphs contrast the consumption of
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water
 in three different categories, namely, residential, industry, and
agriculture
 in
San
Diego
,
California
, and
in
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the
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worldwide. From an
overall
 perspective, it is noticeable that
agriculture
 consumes the largest amount of
water
 in the world.
However
, people’s consumption of the
water
 in industry’s category experiences the lowest. As is obviously shown in the pie charts,
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agriculture
is accounted
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 for 69%
in
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 the
worldwide
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 which is approximately near
to
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the percentage of
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water
 usage in residential in
San
Diego
 nation, at 60% and 39% and 8% in
California
, and
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the
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worldwide, respectively.
However
, the
agriculture
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 usage of
water
 in
California
 witness 28%
while
 the rate usage of
water
 in
San
Diego
 is 17%.
On the other hand
, the smallest amount of
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consumption of
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water
 is
accounted
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 for 23%
in
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 industry in both,
San
Diego
, and
in
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the rest of the world.
Nevertheless
, people use more
water
 in
California
 for industry expenditure with a percentage of 33%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, agriculture, san, diego, california with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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