The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate statistics about the three leading manufacturers globally for four different dairy items (
milk
, cheese, butter, milk
powder) in 2012.
It can be easily seen that the EU
were the world’s largest supplier of milk
and cheese in 2012. While
the United States
was the third-largest supplier of milk
and butter in the world.
Regarding dairy products, it is milk
. The EU
were the leader in production accounting for 142,970 metric tons (MT
). Following were India and the United States
accounted for 127,000 MT
and 90,038 respectively. For cheese, the EU
remained the leader with 7,120 MT
. Ranked second was the United States
and Brazil ranked third. For butter, India was the largest producer. Meanwhile, the EU
and the United States
only manufactured 2040 MT
and 810 MT
respectively during this
year. The last
dairy production is milk
powder. The leader was China with 1,200 MT
in the year of 2012. New Zeland
made half the output of China and the Correct your spelling
Zealand
EU
milk
powder production is 770 MT
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