The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products in 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate statistics about the three leading manufacturers globally for four different dairy items (
milk
, cheese, butter,
milk
powder) in 2012. It can be easily seen that the
EU
were the world’s largest supplier of
milk
and cheese in 2012.
While
the United
States
was the third-largest supplier of
milk
and butter in the world. Regarding dairy products, it is
milk
. The
EU
were the leader in production accounting for 142,970 metric tons (
MT
). Following were India and the United
States
accounted for 127,000
MT
and 90,038 respectively. For cheese, the
EU
remained the leader with 7,120
MT
. Ranked second was the United
States
and Brazil ranked third. For butter, India was the largest producer. Meanwhile, the
EU
and the United
States
only manufactured 2040
MT
and 810
MT
respectively during
this
year. The
last
dairy production is
milk
powder. The leader was China with 1,200
MT
in the year of 2012. New
Zeland
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Zealand
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made half the output of China and the
EU
milk
powder production is 770
MT
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dairy products
  • Producers
  • Cheese
  • Butter
  • Skimmed milk powder
  • Whole milk powder
  • Global production
  • Metric tonnes
  • Leading
  • Specialize
  • Volume
  • Trends
  • Geographical distribution
  • Significant
  • Comparisons
  • Dominate
  • Sector
  • Diversity
  • Contribution
  • Agricultural output
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