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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart shows, by frequency, the percentages of
people
 in the USA who ate in
fast-food
 outlets between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, in all three years, the two largest groups were those eating in
fast-food
 restaurants once a week and those eating there once or twice a month. Those eating there daily and those never eating there, in comparison, accounted for the smallest proportions.
People
 eating in
fast-food
 outlets once a week represented the largest segment of
people
 in the USA in both 2003 and 2006, at about 31% and 33% respectively.
However
, the percentage dropped to roughly 27 in 2013. The proportion of those who fell into
"once
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the "once
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 or twice a month" category first declined from 30% to 25% between 2003 and 2006. It
then
 went up significantly to around 33% in 2013, making
this
 category the largest that year. The proportion of those eating in
fast-food
 restaurants several times a week varied between 15% and 20%,
while
 the
propotion
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proportion
 eating there a few times a year showed an increase from approximately 13% to 15% over the period.
By contrast
, in any year, the "every day" and "never" categories
each
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apply
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contained no more than 5% of
people
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, fast-food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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