The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
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The charts compare the worldwide
water
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consumed in three different sectors over a 100-year period, and
water
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use in
Brazil
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and the Democratic Republic of
Congo
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in 2000.
It is clear that
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the
overall
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water
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consumption experienced a considerable rise during the period shown in the graph, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of
water
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used.
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, the use of
water
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in
Congo
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is nowhere near as high as it is in
Brazil
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. In 1900, the highest global
water
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consumption was related to agriculture at about 500 km2,
while
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industry and domestic sectors were responsible for nearly 100 and 50 km2 of used
water
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.
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, the figures for housing and industrial categories remained stable until 1950, and by 2000, they had risen strikingly, reaching 500 km2 and just under 1400 km2, respectively. Regarding the agriculture sector, it saw the most significant growth trend by almost 2500 km2. In 2000, each Brazilian consumed 359 m3;
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, the residents of
Congo
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used only 8 m3, which could be justified by their irrigated lands, which is 265 times larger in
Brazil
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than in
Congo
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.
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, it is noteworthy that the total number of inhabitants in
Brazil
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was 176 million, but the population of
Congo
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was not nearly as high at 5.2 million.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, brazil, congo, km with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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