The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates sources of
funds
that came to the police and the pie charts depict how these funds
were spent on different sectors in 2017 and 2018.
Overall
, the National government was the main source which contributed more funds
to the police whereas
grants were the lowest contribution in the given years. Furthermore
, it can be seen that salaries were the main spending and lowest accounted for technologies in the given time period.
with regards to the year 2017, The total of funds
pumped by different sections accounted for 304m while
75% of funds
received were distributed on salaries. In contrast
to the total of cash, the main influencer for that was the national government which allocated 175.5m followed by local taxes at 91.2m while
the lowest amount was recieved
from other sources like grants exactly 38m. Money
was distributed for buildings and transport and technology was 17% and 8% respectively.
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received
On the other hand
in 2018, the total of funds
increased to 318.6m more Correct your spelling
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than in
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2017 Correct your spelling
than in
whereas
the national government was the main source like in the previous year which contributed 177.8 m
which seems a slight increase. Secondly
, the highest money provider was local taxes which also
increased by almost 11m. However
, other sources, provided 38.5m of which contributed more than 0.5 m
than in 2017. Money paid for salaries was reduced by 6% in 2018 which accounted for 69% followed by buildings and transport remained the same in the given year at 17%. However
, funds
allocated for the technology were increased by 6% which amounted to14
% in 2018.Correct your spelling
to 14
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