The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates sources of
funds
that came to the police and the pie charts depict how these Use synonyms
funds
were spent on different sectors in 2017 and 2018.
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Overall
, the National government was the main source which contributed more Linking Words
funds
to the police Use synonyms
whereas
grants were the lowest contribution in the given years. Linking Words
Furthermore
, it can be seen that salaries were the main spending and lowest accounted for technologies in the given time period.
with regards to the year 2017, The total of Linking Words
funds
pumped by different sections accounted for 304m Use synonyms
while
75% of Linking Words
funds
received were distributed on salaries. Use synonyms
In contrast
to the total of cash, the main influencer for that was the national government which allocated 175.5m followed by local taxes at 91.2m Linking Words
while
the lowest amount was Linking Words
recieved
from other sources like grants exactly 38m. Money
was distributed for buildings and transport and technology was 17% and 8% respectively.
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received
On the other hand
in 2018, the total of Linking Words
funds
increased to 318.6m more Use synonyms
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than
than in
thanin
2017 Correct your spelling
than in
whereas
the national government was the main source like in the previous year which contributed 177.8 Linking Words
m
which seems a slight increase. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the highest money provider was local taxes which Linking Words
also
increased by almost 11m. Linking Words
However
, other sources, provided 38.5m of which contributed more than 0.5 Linking Words
m
than in 2017. Money paid for salaries was reduced by 6% in 2018 which accounted for 69% followed by buildings and transport remained the same in the given year at 17%. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
funds
allocated for the technology were increased by 6% which amounted Use synonyms
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% in 2018.Correct your spelling
to 14
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