The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the top ten
countries
China
, United States
, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea for the usage of electricity
and producing electricity
in 2014.
As can be seen, China
stayed at the top of the rank among the ten countries
, with approximately 5.398 production
and about 5.322 consumption
.
What is more, we can see Korea at the bottom of the rank among 10 countries
, with around 485 producing electricity
and about 485.1 usages of electricity
.
According to
the chart, we can see the United States
stayed in second place in usage and consumption
of electricity
, as a result
, China
and the United States
are the biggest countries
that produce electricity
and also
spend electricity
among other countries
in 2014, but they have a few differences between production
and consumption
.
In the third place
we have Russia with usage of around 1.038 and Add a comma
place,
production
of about 1.057 compared to China
is half of the production
and consumption
.
The next countries
are Japan and India they are the same, furthermore
, we have Canada, France, Brazil and Korea which they use less electricity
compared to other countries
.
In conclusion, China
and the United States
produce more electricity
and spend more electricity
, however
, expect Russia , Japan, India other countries
to spend less electricity
and produce less electricity
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