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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the top ten
countries
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China
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, United
States
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, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea for the usage of
electricity
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 and producing
electricity
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 in 2014. As can be seen,
China
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 stayed at the top of the rank among the ten
countries
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, with approximately 5.398
production
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 and about 5.322
consumption
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. What is more, we can see Korea at the bottom of the rank among 10
countries
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, with around 485 producing
electricity
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 and about 485.1 usages of
electricity
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.
According to
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 the chart, we can see the United
States
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 stayed in second place in usage and
consumption
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 of
electricity
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,
as a result
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,
China
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 and the United
States
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 are the biggest
countries
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 that produce
electricity
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 and
also
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 spend
electricity
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 among other
countries
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 in 2014, but they have a few differences between
production
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 and
consumption
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. In the third
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 we have Russia with usage of around 1.038 and
production
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 of about 1.057 compared to
China
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 is half of the
production
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 and
consumption
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. The next
countries
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 are Japan and India they are the same,
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, we have Canada, France, Brazil and Korea which they use less
electricity
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 compared to other
countries
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. In conclusion,
China
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 and the United
States
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 produce more
electricity
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 and spend more
electricity
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,
however
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, expect Russia , Japan, India other
countries
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 to spend less
electricity
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 and produce less
electricity
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.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the seventh paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, china, states, electricity, production, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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