The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six  areas of the world.
The pie charts give us information about the divided categories of the usage of
water
in 6 different regions around the world.
Overall
, in the agricultural sector, the top three contributors are Central
Asia
, Africa, and South East
Asia
,
while
in the domestic sector are South
America
,
Europe
, and
then
North
America
.
However
, industrial
use
remained similar despite
Europe
and North
America
sitting as the highest. The majority of South Americans
use
water
for agricultural purposes about 71%, compared with
Europe
and North
America
where residents mainly
use
approximately 50% of
water
in the manufacturing part.
Whereas
,
water
in North
America
is mostly used for farming activities, apparently 7% higher than the
Europe
where there
are
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around one-third. The highest
water
usage in local
use
among those western areas is led by South
America
, followed by
Europe
, and North
America
at the lowest. Meanwhile, the
water
purposes in Central
Asia
, South East
Asia
and Africa are dominantly allocated for the agricultural zone with the percentages ranging from 80% up to 90%. The industrial field is under 15%, even smaller for the domestic sector among those regions
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