The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate measures of
electricity
production
by various fuel sources in two different countries, Australia and France, between 1980 and 2000.
According to
the given data, the most
amount
of
electricity
manufacturing belonged to coal and hydropower during these years. The other sources were used to
power
manufacturing in the low
amount
respectively and the volume of these dropped a lot in the end.
In addition
,
this
nation had not benefited from nuclear
power
at all. In France, we are witnessing that the usage
amount
of coal and oil has been stable approximately in
this
period.
However
,
this
country even made
electricity
from nuclear energy. The usage
amount
of it has increased a lot
at the end
of the period. The rest sources were located in the low position respectively. The
power
production
by other energies has decreased significantly.
To sum up
, Australia has the most use of coal for
electricity
production
compared to the others.
However
, France had a suitable benefit from the nuclear
power
source to
electricity
production
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, amount, power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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