The charts below show the average consumption of three nutrients by adults in the UK. All of these nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average consumption of three nutrients by adults in the UK. All of these nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts illustrate the average percentage of three potentially unhealthy nutrients consumed by adults in the UK in four different meals.
Overall
, breakfast and lunch contain all nutrients quite balanced,
while
sodium
and saturated fat are consumed the most in dinner. Added
sugar
has the most proportion in
snacks
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time. Saturated fat and added
sugar
are in breakfast, with the same 16%,
whereas
sodium
is found, with only 13%. In terms of lunch, it contains
sodium
and saturated fat, with 28% and 26%, respectively. Added
sugar
is consumed just 20% in lunch compared to other nutrients. It can be seen that the most consumption of
sodium
and saturated fat is contained in dinner, with 42% and 39%,
while
it accounts for 19% of added
sugar
in dinner.
Additionally
, snack foods contain the most added
sugar
, with 45% which is more than two times as compared to
each
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sodium
and saturated fat which is only 17% and 19%.
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