the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp

arison. write at least 150 words.
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The line graph provides information about the total number of products shipped in the United Kingdom in four distinct routes from 1974 to 2002. The unit is measured in
million
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the graph that the transport of materials by road was high not only at the onset but
also
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at the end
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of the year. Both routes of shipping experienced a different trend throughout the year.
While
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water and Rail transportation were quite similar
initially
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, rail surpassed it
at the end
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of the year with more products.
To begin
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with, exporting of goods by road stood at just above 60
million
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tonnes
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in 1974,
however
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, the figure decreased gradually to approximately 80 in 20 years until it skyrocketed to almost 100
million
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tonnes
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in the
last
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period.
By contrast
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,
although
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as well as
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export of materials was almost similar in 1974, 40
million
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tonnes
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,
nonetheless
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marine mode of exporting showed many significant changes. It increased gradually in the next 2 years by almost 58 and plateaued in the next 10 years.
Nevertheless
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, rail did not show significant improvements, in fact, it fluctuated from 1978 to 1998. Surprisingly, the pipeline did not export any materials at the onset
nevertheless
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it recorded a sharp increase to about 25
million
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tonnes
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in 1982 and remained relatively stable from 1982 to 1990.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, nevertheless".
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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