An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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an increase in the

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of people who are experiencing cosmetic surgery with the purpose

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a better appearance. There are some mental factors to contribute to

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behaviour,

nevertheless

,

this

trend is a negative development because

anybody

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have

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positive things to showcase and nobody is perfect.

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experienced

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cosmetic surgery are motivated to look

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and prevent the obvious

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from their relatives and friends.

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, the majority of these individuals suffered from depression and anxiety

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self-esteem

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lowest level.

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, some boys and girls have to deal with bullying in their schools or universities because of their appearance, and

as a result

, they consider

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the situation,

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perfects

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and

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in their social networks that they are pretty and happy.

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, the decision to change their appearance had a negative impact

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society, since nowadays

it is clear that

nothing in

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world is perfect.

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, the example for others is that everyone should change what he

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like about his body

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reality and accepting his nature itself.

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instagram

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would look fascinated to have

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surgery at an early stage which in some cases could be dangerous physically and mentally. In conclusion, debate for plastic or cosmetic surgeries is recognised to be crucial in

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modern era, since many boys and girls

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always to look good in order to prevent negative comments, but what for some people is considered ugly, for others might be appreciated, just anyone should accept the beauty of his nature.