The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.

The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.
The chart illustrates how many Home and International
students
at a British college were learning Computer Science from 2010 to 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were more local
students
than foreigners, both male and female.
However
, the number of the British
men
had fluctuated throughout the period. In the beginning period, the number of indigenous
men
in computer major was almost 40
people
,
then
it plunged, reaching under 25
people
in 2011. One year later, in 2012, they had peaked at about 43
people
, being the highest total local
students
among
men
.
On the other hand
, during 2010 and 2012,
people
who came from outside were always fewer than inside but had increased significantly from 20 to about 38
people
. The female
students
had a slightly different trend. At the university, they had about 32 women
students
in 2010. It rose considerably between 49 to 50
people
until 2012.
Moreover
, the extraneous women had no more than 20
students
, in comparison with those
men
students
during three periods.
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  • bar chart
  • number
  • students
  • Computer Science
  • UK university
  • increased consistently
  • significant rise
  • recorded
  • enrolled
  • attributed to
  • growing demand
  • professionals
  • job market
  • popularity
  • technology-related fields
  • inferred
  • subject
  • gaining prominence
  • steady growth
  • positive trend
  • field
  • portrays
  • importance
  • technological advancements
  • society
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