The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provided,
delineate
the process of filtered Correct subject-verb agreement
delineates
water
and it is very purposive. The first process is when you have Use synonyms
a
dirty Remove the article
apply
water
, you can pour the Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
into
the
plastic barrel filled with sand, charcoal, and gravel. People need to prepare these materials and Correct article usage
a
arranged
Wrong verb form
arrange
it
in one stack inside the plastic barrel. The Correct pronoun usage
them
water
will Use synonyms
absorp
with sand, charcoal, and gravel. The Correct your spelling
absorb
water
is being filtered with those 3 materials and the dirty Use synonyms
water
is now transformed into Use synonyms
a
cleaner Remove the article
apply
water
.
The second step is linking the plastic barrel with the storage drum through a pipe so the Use synonyms
water
will be able to flow through that pipe and we could Use synonyms
to built
Verb problem
build
path
Add an article
a path
of
the Change preposition
for
water
flow. The storage drum is Use synonyms
also
connected through another pipe that can be used for pouring the clean Linking Words
water
.
After going through Use synonyms
filtering
process, we can conclude that the dirty Add an article
a filtering
the filtering
water
turns into clean Use synonyms
water
and Use synonyms
it
is safe for drinking purposes.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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