The graph shows the amount of money spent on book in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line graph
depict
how much Change the verb form
depicts
people
in Germany, France, Italy and Australia spent their money
on book
in 1995 and 2005. In general, Fix the agreement mistake
books
it is clear that
Germany was
the highest number of Verb problem
had
people
who spent their money
on books
from 1995 until 2005 and Austria was the lowest country which spent their money
on books
from 1995 until 2003.
A lot of german
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German
people
who
spent their Correct pronoun usage
apply
money
on Add an article
the book
a book
book
in 2005. Over the period, German Fix the agreement mistake
books
people
who buy a book
fluctuated. Its increase in 1999 and dripping in 2003 eventhough
it was not Correct your spelling
even though
significantly
. Change the word
significant
This
fluctuated has similiarity with community
in Add an article
the community
italy
. The Change the capitalization
Italy
different
was in 1999 Replace the word
difference
people
in italy
who buy Change the capitalization
Italy
books
dripping than before. The country which increased steadily in buy
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buying
books
was france
. Change the capitalization
France
Whereas
, number
of Correct article usage
the number
people
in Austria for
use their Change preposition
apply
money
on books
rised
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rose
since
1995 Change preposition
from
untill
1999 and steady until 2001 Correct your spelling
until
then
massive
rise until 2005.
Correct article usage
a massive
Books
become important stuff to buy for some human
. We can get big of information through a Fix the agreement mistake
humans
book
. High and low amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
people
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spend
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