The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

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The pie charts illustrate the percentage ratio of the five resources that delivered energy in a state from 1985 to 2003.

Overall

, it can be seen that

Oil

was the most used resource by far in both years.

Oil

also

decreased its dominance, whilst other categories got their popularity, except nuclear. The three biggest sources in 1985 were

Oil

, Nuclear, and Natural Gas, with 52%, 22%, and 13%, respectively.

However

Oil

declined its share to 39% in 2003, Nuclear saw a notable decrease to 8%.

On the other hand

, Natural Gas replaced Nuclear as the second-highest natural in 2003. The remaining three categories had under a tenth of the total in 1985 each, but the Coal and Other Renewable rose after 18 years. The number of Coal's proportion peaked from 8% to 22% in 2003 and became the third-highest in the

last

period.

Moreover

, the Other Renewable increased slightly by about 3%. Hydro was the only resource which remained steady between 1985 and 2003.

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