The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
T
This
picture displays the function of a central heating system in a home.
Overall
, it is clear that
the main feature for
the heater is the Change preposition
of
water
storage tank
, the radiator and the boiler.This
hot water
tank
contains many other things such
as pump
, overflow pipe and the small tubes through which the Correct article usage
a pump
water
flows .
Firstly
, the liquid from the tank
flows through the pipe and splitsinto
two Correct your spelling
splits into
split into
direction
.
One part of the Change to a plural noun
directions
water
streams to the hot water
taps and the other goes to the storage tank
which then
descends towards the boiler.
Two pipes travels
from the boiler where one has a small pump which Change the verb form
travel
trwhich
is run by either gas or oil and enters the hot Correct your spelling
which
water
radiator through a small pump where the water
is controlled to a cold temperature and the other tube which does not have pipe
connects to each hot Correct article usage
a pipe
water
radiators.Submitted by jennimanu926 on
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