The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph below shows the
number
of men
and women
studying in
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education
in Britain in three phases and if they were learning full-time or part-time.
Overall
, there were more men
and women
studying in
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education
. The period between 1970 and 1971 had the least number
of both men
and women
studying in full-time education
whereas
1990/91 had the most number
with people learning in part-time studies.
In 1970 and 1971, the number
of men
in full -time
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full-time
education
doubled that of women
with
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while
in 1990/91 the number
of women
in part-time education
was 20% just over above that of men
. Furthermore
, men
studying full-time were equal to women
studying full-time in the same year. The number
of men
studying full-time increased gradually by 50% to approximately 200 800. The number
of women
in part-time studies rose significantly from about 750 000 to 110 000 in 1990/91Submitted by karigaruvimbo on
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