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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph below shows the
number
 of
men
 and
women
 studying
in
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tertiary
education
 in Britain in three phases and if they were learning full-time or part-time.
Overall
, there were more
men
 and
women
 studying
in
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part-time than in full-time
education
. The period between 1970 and 1971 had the least
number
 of both
men
 and
women
 studying in full-time
education
whereas
 1990/91 had the most
number
 with people learning in part-time studies. In 1970 and 1971, the
number
 of
men
 in
full -time
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full-time
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education
 doubled that of
women
with
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 roughly 50 000
while
 in 1990/91 the
number
 of
women
 in part-time
education
 was 20% just over above that of
men
.
Furthermore
,
men
 studying full-time were equal to
women
 studying full-time in the same year. The
number
 of
men
 studying full-time increased gradually by 50% to approximately 200 800. The
number
 of
women
 in part-time studies rose significantly from about 750 000 to 110 000 in 1990/91
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