The charts below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

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the

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ratio

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fruits

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and

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vegetables

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consumption for

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in the UK per day from 2001 to 2008.

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were the most

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dietary nutrition

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consuming the highest rate of

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were the least

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for

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healthier diet between 2001 and 2008.

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the beginning, it started with the lowest data

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to the following years until 2008 from any people who consumed

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and

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. It gradually increased until it reached its peak in 2006

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35

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for

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and 27

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percent

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for

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. The

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experienced the highest rate

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in the next year with 26

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. After its vivid top in 2006, the data experienced a slight decrease for the next 2 years until 2008. The

last

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2 years experienced low disparity for

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for

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consuming

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. It was only around 1 to 4

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differences between them.

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were remain

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unchanged from 2001 to 2003 with 13

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for offspring and 17

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percent

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for

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.

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little difference happened in 2007 and 2008

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they

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positioned in the same ratio.

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were gradually improved more for recommended consumption

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were started in a high position but increased slowly.