The charts below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The charts
depicts
the Change the verb form
depict
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of Correct your spelling
ratio
fruits
and vegetables
consumption for Change the noun form
vegetable
children
, men
and women
in the UK per day from 2001 to 2008. Women
were the most concious
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conscious
for
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about
with
consuming the highest rate of Change preposition
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vegetables
and fruits
while
children
were the least eater
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eaters
for
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of
the
healthier diet between 2001 and 2008.
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the beginning, it started with the lowest data Change the preposition
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comparing
to the following years until 2008 from any people who consumed Wrong verb form
compared
fruits
and vegetables
. It gradually increased until it reached its peak in 2006 by
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with
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
female
and 27 Fix the agreement mistake
females
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per cent
male
. The Fix the agreement mistake
males
children
experienced the highest rate for
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of
dietary
in the next year with 26 Replace the word
diet
percent
.
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per cent
last
2 years experienced low disparity for women
, men
and children
for
consuming Change preposition
in
fruits
and vegetables
. It was only around 1 to 4 percent
differences between them.
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per cent
Overall
, Men
and children
were remain
unchanged from 2001 to 2003 with 13 Change the verb form
remained
percent
for offspring and 17 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
male
. Fix the agreement mistake
males
The
little difference happened in 2007 and 2008 Correct article usage
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where
they Correct word choice
when
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were nearly
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fruits, vegetables, children, men, women, percent with synonyms.
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