The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows sources of police budget in an area located in Britain in 2017 and 2018,
while
the pie charts illustrate how the Linking Words
money
was spent in the same years. The initial impression is that the maximum Use synonyms
amount
of Use synonyms
money
was distributed for salaries and Use synonyms
this
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money
mostly came from the national government in both 2017 and 2018.
It is seen from the table that the total police budget was about 318 Use synonyms
million
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pounds
in 2018 which was about 14 Use synonyms
million
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pounds
more than 2017. Use synonyms
In addition
, the highest Linking Words
amount
of Use synonyms
money
was taken from the national government over 175 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
pounds
in 2017 and 2018. In 2108, the Use synonyms
amount
of budget came from local taxes, Use synonyms
however
, witnessed an increase of almost 10 Linking Words
million
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pounds
, Use synonyms
while
other sources remained slightly unchanged at around 18 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
pounds
.
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According to
the pie charts, the gained Linking Words
money
significantly spent on officers' and staff's salaries which was approximately one-fourth in 2017 and just above two-sixth in 2018. The Use synonyms
amount
of gathering Use synonyms
money
distributed in buildings and transport, Use synonyms
moreover
, was nearly under one-fifth which did not change from 2017 to 2018. Linking Words
Additionally
, technology got the least Linking Words
amount
of Use synonyms
money
in two years. It was 8% in 2017 which had a rise of 6% in 2018.Use synonyms
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