The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the ratio of pass rate between
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males
female
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females
dirving
certification during the period from 1980 to 2010.
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driving
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, it is clear that
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men and women were the most in 2000 and they were Change preposition
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least
in 1980.
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the least
first,
there were nearly half of people who passed the test, and it rose to around 52% in a decade before it hit all-time
high, at around 68%. In the end, it decreased to 64% in 2010.
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when it comes to men, it witnessed an upward trend during 40 years. Add an article
an all-time
Inatially
, only less than one-third have driving licenses. Correct your spelling
Initially
However
, it increased to about 38% and remained at 49% approximately
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from approximately
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to2010
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to 2010
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