The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opedend, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.
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the table gives us information about underground railway systems in London,Paris, number of visitors the level of consumers of underground railway percentage ,(
Tokyo
,Washinton,Kyoto
and Los
Angeles . with date
of opening ,Add an article
the date
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a kilometer
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of Change the spelling
kilometre
route
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the route
also
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a
the
in
per year.Change preposition
apply
overall
it can be seen that the
most passengers have visited Correct article usage
apply
Tokyo
underground also
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,Change the capitalization
Paris
however
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were
at the lowest point in Change the verb form
was
Kyoto
as well as
Los
Angeles .
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as , Tokyo
which was open
in 1863Wrong verb form
opened
an
the Correct your spelling
and
lengeth
was 394 kilometers the number of passengers Correct your spelling
length
were
1928 millions , Correct subject-verb agreement
was
additionally
paris railway has
opened in 1900 but the number of users Unnecessary verb
apply
were
1191Change the verb form
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millions
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million
were
less than Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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the useres
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of Correct your spelling
users
Tokyo
underground .
refers to the others
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other
counries
, namely,Correct your spelling
countries
england
and Change the capitalization
England
washinton
Dc people in there were Correct your spelling
Washington
useing
underground Correct your spelling
using
raiway
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railway
at
the Middle ofChange preposition
in
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the
london
775 ,dc 114 ) , even though , Change the capitalization
London
kyoto
and Change the capitalization
Kyoto
los
angeles have used the undeground
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underground
raily
way at the Correct your spelling
daily
bottome
of the list and at the Correct your spelling
bottom
lowes
level which was 45 for Correct your spelling
lowest
kyoto
50 for Change the capitalization
Kyoto
los
.Correct your spelling
loss
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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