The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar charts show the ownership of computers from 2002 to 2010 and the related education level of owners.
Overall
Linking Words
,
It is clear that
Linking Words
the tendency of
people
Use synonyms
who have a computer is on the rise. Meanwhile, the amount of computers increases with the degree level. In terms of the first graph, over 55% of
people
Use synonyms
had computers in 2002, and gradually increased to 75% in the end, which was the highest point in the period . Speaking of the second chart, only 15% of
people
Use synonyms
who did not have a high school diploma had electronic devices in 2002, but it rose to over 40%. When it comes to high school graduated persons, it grew by 30%, from around 35% to 65%. And
then
Linking Words
, the ratio of college (incomplete) students started at 65%, amounting to 86% in 2010.
In addition
Linking Words
, similar patterns can be seen in undergraduate and postgraduate
people
Use synonyms
, There were 68% and 75% in 2002 and went up to 88% and 95% respectively.
Submitted by ql15611122783 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consistent increase
  • growing reliance on technology
  • clear correlation
  • digital divide
  • notable growth
  • most pronounced disparity
  • gap reduced considerably
  • percentage growth
  • higher educational levels
  • educational groups
What to do next:
Look at other essays: