The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2001.
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delienate
the changes in the proportion of two various Correct your spelling
delineate
delineates
acocommodation
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accommodation
accommodations
type
namely, households owning and households renting in two states (England and Wales)Fix the agreement mistake
types
a
period of nearly nine decades ( 1918 to 2011).
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for a
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. We can analyse that clearly at first glance the highest rates between 1918 to 1971 is
Households in rented . Correct subject-verb agreement
are
On the other hand
, Household
in owned Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
caught a
upward Change the article
an
tedecy
after Correct your spelling
tendency
today
the
1971.
It is explicitly observed that the changes in Change the article
apply
household
in rented Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
is
not stable. The highest point of Change the verb form
are
this
option is in 1918 with roughly 75 individual
in every hundred. Furterhormere, it Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
this
rate that made their position the highest rate in Add a missing verb
was this
this
graph. Besides
, in this
year, the lowest proportion of owned accommodation
type
with roughly 21 person
in every hundred. In 1971 two Change to a plural noun
people
type
encounted at %50. Change to a plural noun
types
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, the owned Correct your spelling
Therefore
type
seem
to Correct subject-verb agreement
seems
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begin
began
rise abruptly Add the particle
began to
in contrast
to rented
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the rented
type
's dramatic decreases
. It can be clearly seen that, In 2001 preseverdes the lowest Fix the agreement mistake
decrease
percantage
(31 Correct your spelling
percentage
individual
in every hundred) of rented Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
accommodation
and the highest percantage
(69 Correct your spelling
percentage
person
in every hundred) of own Change to a plural noun
people
type
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of accomodation
accomodation
.
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accommodation
Overall
, The
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in The
rented dominated
areas before Add a hyphen
rented-dominated
the
1971 Change the article
apply
after
the following years (excluding 1971) owned Correct word choice
and after
type
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