The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2001.

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the changes in the proportion of two various

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accommodation

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namely, households owning and households renting in two states (England and Wales)

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period of nearly nine decades ( 1918 to 2011).

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. We can analyse that clearly at first glance the highest rates between 1918 to 1971

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Households in rented .

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1971. It is explicitly observed that the changes in

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in rented

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not stable. The highest point of

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option is in 1918 with roughly 75

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in every hundred. Furterhormere, it

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rate that made their position the highest rate in

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year, the lowest proportion of owned

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with roughly 21

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in every hundred. In 1971 two

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encounted at %50.

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. It can be clearly seen that, In 2001 preseverdes the lowest

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in every hundred) of rented

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and the highest

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percentage

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in every hundred) of own

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of accomodation

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accomodation

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accommodation

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rented dominated

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1971

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the following years (excluding 1971) owned

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covered huge proportions.

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2001.

With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

In some countries, owning a home rether than renting one is very important for people

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try cooporate more rather that competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people state that the national teams and an individual sportsman and sportswomen should be financially sponsored by the government or non-government body. how far do you agree or disagree with this statement?