The diagrams below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The provided picture illustrates two approaches that people use to collect water for irrigation and farming purposes.
Overall
, there are two common methods.
However
, the first method harnesses the labour force and the other takes advantage of an ox. Having looked at the given diagram more closely,
it is clear that
the labour force can only be used in a shallow channel about 1-2 metres near the field with some simple equipment
such
as a basket made from bamboo or leather and ropes. Two farmers use their strength to take the water from the canal, afterwards, they swing directly to the fields. Relating to the “rope and bucket”,
this
method uses a cow in place of farmers and it can be used in a deep well up to 50 metres next to the irrigation channel.
Additionally
, it consists of a bucket, rollers and pulley. Its way of getting aqua is
also
different from the “swing basket”, the ox travels down the slope and the bucket is pulled up thanks to the rollers and pulley system.
Then
, water from the bucket is poured into the channel which is distributed to the fields.
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