In many developing nation, the rush to become industrialized has created major problems with air and water quality. What are the problems that this has brought about and offer some solutions to these problems?

Air

and water problems are tremendously increasing in every nation, particularly in developing countries which are trying to boost their economy through industries.

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people will suffer from

air

pollution and water contamination are the

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dilemma.

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issues

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tendency. One of the major problems is that

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companie's

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company's

waste

is dumped into the river,

thus

, water might be polluted.

Factorie's

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fully harmful with

toxic

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like sulphur and carbon monoxide,

this harmful chemicals

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are eaten by fish and long-term

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are retained. Another trouble is that

factories

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emissions are out from the chimneys and

it

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will be mixed into the

air

so that

air

contamination happens,

thus

, people will suffer from some dangerous health

issues

such

as Asthma, lung cancer and respiratory

issues

.

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, a recent survey from the Times of India said that many individuals had lung cancer

which

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they live near places that have manufacturing companies. Despite these

troubles

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some possible solutions can be overcome. One of the major remedies is that the

authority

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should

be implemented

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a strict rules

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against the

manufacturer

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who

are dumped

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waste

into the river.

For instance

, if a ruling party had implemented a hard law in the past, people would not suffer now. Another solution is that the population should try to use the

recycle

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products

instead

of buying new ones so that manufacturing companies' emission ratio might be diminished. If

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product's

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demand will

reduced

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,

the

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production will be diminished.

To conclude

,

factorie's

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waste

is

dumpted

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dumped

into the river with toxic harmful chemicals and

factorie's

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toxic

emission

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emissions

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can be mixed into the

air

so that

air

pollution happens

are

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the problems of

this

trend.

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, a government should implement a strict law to protect the marine and the population should use recycled products

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buying

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new ones are the remedies

of

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this

phenomenon.