The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial sectors - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts information about the contribution of three different selected sectors to the UK economy including agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial areas from 1900 to 2000. The data is presented by the percentage figures of selected sectors.
By and large, it is ubiquitous that the first two given years gave huge contributions from each sector.
However
, in the following years
there was a noticeable reduction Add a comma
years,
from
Agricultural and manufacturing areas.
As clearly seen from the statistical data, the highest contribution from the agricultural sector was in 1990, accounting for just over a half Change preposition
in
percent
. Compared to the first period, the percentage did not show a big difference, which was just below 50 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, in the following year
it had a significant decrease Add a comma
year,
Change preposition
of
for
almost Change preposition
of
four tenths
Add a hyphen
four-tenths
percent
in 1995 Change the spelling
per cent
then
continued to decline until a mere 4 percent
in 2000.
Turning to another interesting fraction, the manufacturing sector had the highest percentage in the first year, amounting Change the spelling
per cent
for
approximately 45%. Change preposition
to
However
in the next year, it went down slowly until it received almost 15 Add a comma
However,
percent
in 2000. In contrast
with business and finance, it started with a tiny fraction (around 5%) then
rose slightly until nearly a third percent
in 2000.Change the spelling
per cent
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