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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart depicts the number of people living in metropolis over a 50-year period,
along with
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 projections for 2030 and 2040 in four different Asian regions (the
Philippines
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,
Malaysia
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,
Thailand
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, and
Indonesia
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).
Overall
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, all states are predicted to increase in populace by 2040 when massive growth emerges in
Indonesia
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 and
Malaysia
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, around four times higher than in other countries. The total of people in the
Philippines
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 and
Thailand
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 steadily grew throughout the observed period, followed by the forecast. Regarding people living downtown,
Malaysia
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 stood at 30%,
whereas
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Indonesia
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 had the lowest point, starting at approximately 15%.
While
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Indonesia
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 began with a gradual rise,
Malaysia
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 surprisingly skyrocketed and took the lead, which has the lion's share by 2020 (roughly 75%). Both countries are projected to have most of the population living in cities, with 60% of
Indonesia
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 and 20% of Malaysians living in rural areas.
Thailand
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's growing population started at just below 20%, smaller than the
Philippines
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' (just over 30%).
Thailand
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 experienced a progressive upturn;
in contrast
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, the
Philippines
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' citizens rose steeply in 1990 before falling regularly by 2010, ending the year with an average of 45%. The quantity of residents in
Thailand
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 is forecasted to grow by 50% of the total number who live in towns;
on the other hand
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, a minority of Filipinos (about 45%) live in the countryside.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines, malaysia, thailand, indonesia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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