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As computers translate quicky and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is argued that learning
a foreign
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. It should be to easier to learning some
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. I am
complately
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completely
disgree
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disagree
 with
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 statement. Because translation software advancements make communication easier across
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, diminishing the need for
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 learning.
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 increasing sophistication of
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 will make many people
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learn foreign
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 anywhere and anytime.
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, one can start a conversation with a foreigner of a different
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 and culture using only their smartphone.
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, nowadays there are many apps that connect us with strangers. These events can be utilised to learn a foreign
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, in some
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 we are required to be able to master foreign
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 as working in tourism and the health sector. Definitely, learning new
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 helps individuals
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improve their communication skills.
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, If we are meeting with strangers and communicating,
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 we do not understand the
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 they use, we can use our smartphones to translate what they are talking about.
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language
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 learning improves cognitive abilities and has educational benefits beyond communication. In conclusion, in professional fields, knowing a foreign
language
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 can open up opportunities and be seen as a valuable skill. Certainly, learning new
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languages
lenguages
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languages
 so important to increase competitiveness in the digital era.
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 mastering foreign
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 we can expand connections and
can
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add insights related to foreign cultures

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • automated translation
  • cultural competence
  • nuances
  • cognitive development
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • globalization
  • cultural immersion
  • language barrier
  • cross-cultural communication
  • language acquisition
  • idiomatic expressions
  • dialects
  • pronunciation
  • syntax
  • semantics
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