You will be celebrating your son's 6 th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this colleague. In your letter: ● invite your colleague to your son's birthday party ● give details of the party and it's date and time ● say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party
Dear Kamila
How are you? I have not seen you for a long time.
So,
l
am writing this
letter to you to invite you to my girl's birthday it will be next week l
will be happy when you do
To begin
with, birthday
party will be held at home . My house is near a big store birthday on August 25 my relatives and friends are coming to it and famous singers will Add an article
the birthday
also
come to it ,l
will be happy if you come to
Next to the party l
will show you the neighbourhood.Our neighbourhood has been very busy these days the streets have been planted on also
the streets
I will be so happy to come to you .See you soon .Till next time say hello to all.
Best wishes,
Your lovely friend
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Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, well-organized content, and a proper conclusion. Transition words and phrases can help the flow of ideas.
Greeting and Closing
Begin with a proper salutation, such as 'Dear Kamila,' and conclude with an appropriate farewell. Maintain consistency and formality throughout the letter.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Each paragraph should convey a single idea effectively. Separate distinct pieces of information into their own paragraphs for clarity.
Task Achievement
Address all aspects of the prompt fully. Include clear details on the date, time, and specific location of the party, as well as a more personal note on why your colleague's presence is meaningful.
Writing Tone
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone through the letter. It should be friendly yet respectful, matching the context of inviting a colleague to a personal event.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite