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The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.

The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.
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The line graph provides a comparison of the proportion of
Internet
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 users in three different countries from 1999 to 2009.
It is clear that
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 the proportion of the population who used the
Internet
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 increased in each country over the period shown.
Overall
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, a much larger percentage of Canadians and Americans had access to the
Internet
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 in comparison with Mexicans, and
Canada
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 experienced the fastest growth in
Internet
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 usage. In 1999, the proportion of people using the
Internet
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 in the USA was about 20%. The figures for
Canada
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 and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively. In 2005,
Internet
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 usage in both the USA and
Canada
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 rose to around 70% of the population,
while
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 the figure for Mexico reached just over 25%. By 2009, the percentage of
Internet
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 users was highest in
Canada
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. Almost 100% of Canadians used the
Internet
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, compared to about 80% of Americans and only 40% of Mexicans.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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