Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, describe where you lived when you were a student at the university recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear........................,

#friend #place #course #university #advice #email #student #accommodation #mistakes #students #addresses

Dear Sam, First of all

congradulations

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congratulations

for

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achiving

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achieving

archiving

your dream

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collage

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.I am very excited after hearing

this

great news.I

also

appriciate

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appreciate

for choosing me to take

advices

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. When I was

studing

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studying

at IDP

collage

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college

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I used to live in

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a collage

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collage

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share-room.It was a really good place to live

while

study

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because the bus stop was very next to

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collage's

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share-room

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.It was

very

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calm environment,

due to

this

reson

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reason

you would not get

distub

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distracted

for

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your studies. The best way to find

collage

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college

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accommadation

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accommodation

is by visiting

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collage

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students

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support website

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WWW.IDPstudacc.com.au.You can

also

refer to

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the collages

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collages

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notice-board

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main

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entrance.

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experiance

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experience

,when I were in

collage

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drome the

was

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some sort of drawbacks

such

as very loud

share-rooms

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.Some students are taking drugs and they invite you to do it with them,and some rooms are not

hygenic

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hygienic

.So make sure when you

choosing

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a room to cut out these

type

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of cons. If you have

further

question

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please do not

hassitate

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hesitate

to contact me. yours faithfully, Nipun

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Structure

Ensure proper structuring by including an introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion for clarity.

Tone

Be consistent with the tone throughout the letter, using formal language as it is an advice letter to a friend about important matters.

Cohesion

Use complete sentences and more cohesive devices to clearly connect your ideas and paragraphs.

Task Response

Address all parts of the prompt evenly, providing equal detail and development to each of the three tasks in the prompt.

Accuracy

Proofread your letter to avoid spelling errors ('congradulations' instead of 'congratulations') and maintain a high level of grammatical accuracy.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
39Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

167 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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