Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, describe where you lived when you were a student at the university recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear........................,
#friend #place #course #university #advice #email #student #accommodation #mistakes #students #addresses
Dear Sam,
First of all
congradulations
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congratulations
for
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on
achiving
your dream Correct your spelling
achieving
archiving
to
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of
collage
.I am very excited after hearing Correct your spelling
college
this
great news.I also
appriciate
for choosing me to take Correct your spelling
appreciate
advices
.
When I was Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
studing
at IDP Correct your spelling
studying
collage
I used to live in Correct your spelling
college
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a collage
collage
share-room.It was a really good place to live Correct your spelling
college
while
study
because the bus stop was very next to Wrong verb form
studying
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the collage's
collage's
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college's
share-room
.It was Correct your spelling
share room
very
calm environment,Add an article
the very
a very
due to
this
reson
you would not get Correct your spelling
reason
distub
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distracted
for
your studies.
The best way to find Change preposition
by
collage
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college
accommadation
is by visiting Correct your spelling
accommodation
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the collage
collage
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college
students
support website Change noun form
students'
student's
on
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at
also
refer to Correct article usage
the collages
collages
notice-board Correct your spelling
college
on
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at
main
entrance.
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the main
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my Change preposition
From
experiance
,when I were in Correct your spelling
experience
collage
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college
was
some sort of drawbacks Correct subject-verb agreement
were
such
as very loud share-rooms
.Some students are taking drugs and they invite you to do it with them,and some rooms are not Correct your spelling
rooms
hygenic
.So make sure when you Correct your spelling
hygienic
choosing
a room to cut out these Wrong verb form
choose
type
of cons.
If you have Fix the agreement mistake
types
further
question
please do not Fix the agreement mistake
questions
hassitate
to contact me.
yours faithfully,
NipunCorrect your spelling
hesitate
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Structure
Ensure proper structuring by including an introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion for clarity.
Tone
Be consistent with the tone throughout the letter, using formal language as it is an advice letter to a friend about important matters.
Cohesion
Use complete sentences and more cohesive devices to clearly connect your ideas and paragraphs.
Task Response
Address all parts of the prompt evenly, providing equal detail and development to each of the three tasks in the prompt.
Accuracy
Proofread your letter to avoid spelling errors ('congradulations' instead of 'congratulations') and maintain a high level of grammatical accuracy.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,