The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The four pie charts demonstrate the proportion of different
electricity
production in four different countries ( India
, Sweden, Morocco and Vietnam
) from 2003 to 2008.
Overall
, it is clear that
Vietnam
and Morocco did not use nuclear energy
to generate electricity
. While
fossil fuel was the largest source of energy
in Vietnam
and India
, only a mere of this
source use
Wrong verb form
is used
for
produce Change preposition
to
energy
in Sweden.
Energy
produced by fossil Add an article
The energy
fuel
made up Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
for
56% and 82% in Change preposition
apply
Viet nam
and Correct your spelling
Vietnam
India
respectively but only a tiny 5 % of it are
used in Correct subject-verb agreement
is
India
. The rest of electricity
in Correct article usage
the electricity
Vietnam
and Morocco was produced solely from hydro power
.
With regards to the remaining sorts of Correct your spelling
hydropower
energy
in other countries, fossil fuel represented more than four-fifths of the entire quantity of electricity
produced, which was the highest percentage among four
countries. Correct article usage
the four
In contrast
, only a mere 4% of this
source was generated in Sweden, but hydro and nuclear power contributing
52% and 44% Wrong verb form
contributed
correspondingly
.Rephrase
respectively
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