The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The histogram illustrates the data from a survey about
coffee
and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities
in Australia. Overall
, it is evident that the number of people who bought fresh coffee
in the last
4 weeks
in Melbourne has peaked compared to other cities
, while
the individuals who went to a cafe for coffee
or tea in the last
4 weeks
in Brisbane and Adelaide are lacking compared to other cities
.
Looking for more details, the data of people who spent time purchasing fresh coffee
in the last
4 weeks
in Melbourne has submited
at 63%, in Hobart is around 62% and Correct your spelling
submitted
similarly
, in Sydney is around 61% respectively. In contrast
, the individuals who went to cafe
Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
for
purchase Change preposition
to
coffee
or tea in the last
4 weeks
in Brisbane and Adelaide lacked
approximately 33%.
Regarding Verb problem
were
to
the rate of individuals Remove the preposition
apply
bought
instant Correct pronoun usage
who bought
coffee
in the last
4 weeks
in Hobart was higest
compared to other Correct your spelling
higher
cities
at around 50%.Submitted by musa.nuwa on
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