The bar chart provides information about how much earnings from export activity of a country while the table illustrates the proportion of change in values from 2015 to 2016.
The bar chart below gives data about the
amount
of income received from the goods that are sold outside the country whereas
, the table shows the number of variations in percentage between two years .
Overall
, Petroleum products
have got the highest amount
of money received whilst, Textiles
have the least export earnings.Moreover
,Textiles
have the highest percentage change in values in
contrast, Agricultural Add the comma(s)
, in
products
have got the lowest amount
.
In 2015 and 2016 Petroleum products
have got the highest income coming from exports.Additionally
,Engineered goods were the second highest followed by Gems and jewellery.Neither Agricultural products
nor Textiles
were above 40 billion dollars.
Besides
, the percentage of Textiles
in 2015 and 2016 was 15.24% and it was the highest followed by Engineered goods which has an upward amount
of 8.5%.Again both Petroleum products
and Agricultural products
have the minimum recordings and they are less than 4.Submitted by karigaruvimbo on
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