The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given data shows
of
comparison the Correct article usage
a of
habit
of people drinking fresh Fix the agreement mistake
habits
coffee
, instant
Correct word choice
and instant
coffee
and went
to Wrong verb form
going
cafe
for drinking Add an article
a cafe
the cafe
coffee
or tea in the last
month in five cities
in Australia which are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide
and Hobart.
In general, going to the cafe
was the most
favourite in Correct quantifier usage
apply
four
Correct article usage
the four
cities
and consume
fresh Wrong verb form
consuming
coffee
being
the Wrong verb form
was
last
choice in all areas.
Melbourne and Hobart became the city
Fix the agreement mistake
cities
of
the highest population went to the Change preposition
with
cafe
and then
followed by Sidney. These three cities
have figures more
than sixty per cent. Change preposition
of more
Adelaide
was the city with lowest
percentage of Change the article
the lowest
cafe
lovers.
Bought instant coffee
was the middle of consument
in all Correct your spelling
consumption
cities
unless
Change preposition
except
Adelaide
, that
instant Correct word choice
where
coffee
was being
the first priority. Drinking fresh Unnecessary verb
apply
coffee
in Brisbane and Adelaide
were the lowest participants less than thirty five
per cent.Add a hyphen
thirty-five
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