The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The graph demonstrates how a
salmon
develops over the course of its lifetime.
Overall
, the salmon
passes through three different stages of life, taking between nine and ten years to reach its final adult form.
In the beginning, the salmon
starts its life cycle as one salmon
egg among others. These eggs are deposited beneath some small stones within a patch of reeds in a slow-moving upper river
. Once an egg hatches about half a year after being laid, it produces a fry, roughly three to eight centimetres long.
The next step is
for the fry to swim to the faster-flowing lower river
. After remaining in this
river
for approximately four years, the fry transitions into a 12-15cm long smolt and heads for the open sea.
The smolt spends around five years in the open sea. Subsequent to the passing of this
half decade
, Add a hyphen
half-decade
this
fish enters its final form as an adult salmon
, measuring 70 to 76cm, before returning to the upper river
to lay its eggs in the reeds and restart the cycle.Submitted by n97.mortazian on
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