The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
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The graph demonstrates how a
salmon
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develops over the course of its lifetime.
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, the
salmon
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passes through three different stages of life, taking between nine and ten years to reach its final adult form. In the beginning, the
salmon
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starts its life cycle as one
salmon
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egg among others. These eggs are deposited beneath some small stones within a patch of reeds in a slow-moving upper
river
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. Once an egg hatches about half a year after being laid, it produces a fry, roughly three to eight centimetres long.
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for the fry to swim to the faster-flowing lower
river
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. After remaining in
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river
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for approximately four years, the fry transitions into a 12-15cm long smolt and heads for the open sea. The smolt spends around five years in the open sea. Subsequent to the passing of
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half decade
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,
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fish enters its final form as an adult
salmon
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, measuring 70 to 76cm, before returning to the upper
river
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to lay its eggs in the reeds and restart the cycle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life cycle
  • Spawning
  • Freshwater
  • Juvenile
  • Fry
  • Adaptation
  • Migration
  • Smolt
  • Rivers
  • Ocean
  • Challenge
  • Growth
  • Return journey
  • Hatching ground
  • Perilous
  • Upstream
  • Obstacle
  • Ecological impact
  • Preservation
  • Disturbance
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