The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the number of households' yearly income by five
category
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in the US in three
period
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of time. The data
distributed
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in
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US dollars (millions).
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, one can observe from the chart that the lowest
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belong to
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$75,000-$99,999 category in 2011, and the main discrepancy is seen in 2015 between $75,000-$99,000 and $100,000 or more sections. The other noteworthy point is that less than $25,000 narrowed the gap with the $25,000-$49,999 segment in 2011, compared with 2007. From less than $25,000 to $50,000-$74,999, the first section(less than $25,000) started over 25
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of
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households and peaked roughly in 30
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, in 2007 and in 2011,
accordingly
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.
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, the data of
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the $
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25,000-$49,999 section experienced
the
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increase,
approximately
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of approximately
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5
million
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, between 2007 and 2011,
while
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the
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slightly decreased to more than 25
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in 2015. $50,000-$74,999 remained relatively stable within
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period. As for the remaining segmentations, the former one
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off in the same
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throughout the period ,unlike that, the latter one's
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faced fluctuations and
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in
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at
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over 30
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in 2015.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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