The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and pie chart
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the different sources of the police
budget
in one British region and how the money was distributed in the year
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2017 and 2018. At first glance, it is clear
to see
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that the
budget
that spent in the police force increased in 2018, with more spending
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technology and less
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salary. In more detail, compared to the 304.7
million
dollar
budget
in 2017, there was an increase in 2018 at 308.6
million
dollar spending
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the police. And one main source of the
budget
is
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government, from which the
budget
rose slightly from 175.5 to 177.6
million
dollars in 2017. The second major source was local taxes, from which the
budget
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significant rise from 91.2
million
dollars in 2017 to 102.3
million
dollars in 2018. In terms of how money was spent, salary accounted for the largest portion of the annual
budget
in both years, at 75% in 2017 and 69% in 2018 respectively.
While
the percentage of salary was decreasing, the spending
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technology increased nearly double. It rose from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018. And the percentage of spending
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building and transport remained unchanged at 17% in both 2017 and 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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