Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

A large number of humans
are currently travel
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to
English
-speaking nations
for studying
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on
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at
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both colleges and universities.
This
is
due to
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locating
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rich continents and it is easier to find a job and learn in
such
countries,
for example
, England,
Australia
and America. Meanwhile, I am going to explain the major reasons and importance of learning
english
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abroad in the forthcoming essay.
To begin
with, in the United Kingdom,
although
schooling is expensive,
but
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in the long run students will get a large amount of salary which is in
Britain Pounds
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.
This
is why many people can sacrifice to
done
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their studies in England, since Britain is a society of
English
-speakers and
also
America is a native
english-speaking
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state which is the richest country in the world.
Furthermore
, it is very simple to find a graft in the United States, especially if you have a degree or diploma which is in
english
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dialect.
This
is clear
that
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, why a huge population preferred to go to
USA
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to learn and work.
Moreover
,
Australia
is another beautiful nation with a better economy,
hence
, communities from developing states are travelling to
Australia
each and every year looking for greener pastures after finishing their school.
Additionally
, those who speak
english
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earns
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more money in
Australia
and even internationally.
For instance
, it is difficult to find a payable job if you do not communicate in
english
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,
therefore
, no one can doubt that
English
is an international language. To
conclde
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conclude
, millions of human beings are now moving to
English
-speaking places
such
as Britain,
Australia
and the United States in
searching
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of good living in their future lives after
finish
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finishing
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learning, which means that, a degree in
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the english
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english
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language is valuable
as
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compared to other dialects which are not international languages.
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Your essay fails to answer the question sufficiently. It is expected that you address specifically 'why so many people want to study in English' and 'why is English such an important international language.' Your response should contain clear, relevant examples to support your points. Please rework your essay to directly address the prompts and enhance clarity.
coherence cohesion
Your essay lacks a clear organizational pattern and the paragraphs seem disjointed. A more logical structure should be used, with clear topic sentences and cohesive devices to ensure flow. For improved coherence, try to enhance the links between your main points with appropriate transitions and ensure your ideas progress logically throughout the essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalized education
  • Access to education
  • High-quality institutions
  • Career opportunities
  • Proficiency
  • Prerequisite
  • Cultural immersion
  • Language skills
  • Global network
  • Technological advancements
  • Scientific research
  • Academic resources
  • Comprehensive
  • Personal development
  • Independence
  • Immersion
  • Employment prospects
  • Academic exposure
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