The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel’s customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel’s customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
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The pie charts illustrate data about the results of a survey which include the rates of 100
guests
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of the Parkway Hotel on the
customer
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service of the hotel in two separate years.
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, the majority of
guests
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asked in 2005 said that the hotel’s
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service was satisfactory,
while
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in 2010 the highest percentage of respondents thought that the
services
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for customers were good.
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,
it is clear that
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over the five years, the respondents favoured the hotel’s
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care by far more. In 2005, just under half of the
guests
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asked said that the
services
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of the hotel for
guests
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were satisfactory, compared to only 5% who believed the
services
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were excellent.
By contrast
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, in 2010, roughly one out of every ten people who completed the survey said that the
services
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were excellent.
However
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, the percentage of those who thought that the
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were satisfactory fell sharply by almost 28% during the period shown in the charts.
Following
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this
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, nearly 36% of the respondents believed that servings were poor or even very poor in 2005,
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the figure for these options plummeted to 16% of the total
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. It is noticeable that in 2005, 14% of those who completed the questionnaire declared that the hotel’s
customer
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care was good, but the figure improved considerably in 2010, reaching 39%, making it the most popular choice in that year.
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