The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the unemployment rate of Australians in 2012.
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, It can be seen that the number of people who did not work in rural
areas
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is higher than in urban
areas
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. There was a decline
of
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unemployed inhabitants in villages,
however
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, for the cities it was the opposite during the period of time.
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with, the figure of jobless citizens in rural
areas
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, which was almost 7%, had a dramatic decline and reached the lowest point (less than 5%) by the end of the second quarter. For the next two quarters, there were some fluctuations and the number of unemployed people accounted for 5%.
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, urban
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’ rate of workless residents began from just over 2% and had a sharp growth over half a year.
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number decreased to the previous point during three months and for the remaining time, it rose and hit a peak of approximately 5%, which was almost the same as for the rural
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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