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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

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More and more individuals from developing
counties
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countries
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 where
English
 is not the first speaking
language
 tend to migrate to a more advanced
English
-speaking country these days for better career and lifestyle opportunities.
This
 essay will discuss why
English
 has become
such
 a crucial
language
 and the value it holds in the whole world.
To begin
 with,
English
 has become the most spoken
language
 and it is considered
as
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a
language
 that unites everyone
thoughout
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throughout
 the globe. People are trying to
literate
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liberate
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 themselves with
this
language
 because it is the native tongue of the greatest nations
such
 as The United States and Australia. The goal of moving to a developed country
while
 studying is
also
 to build good relations with other individuals from that place which ultimately helps in setting up a strong foundation in that place.
In addition
 to that, the various new
technolgies
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technologies
 and
equipments
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requires
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 people to be able to read and write in
English
. To illustrate, people who plan to move
to
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abroad have to give clear come certification and score an average score in order to be eligible to study or work in
the other
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another
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 country.
English
 is the most dominant and powerful
language
 in the world and most
of
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the
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countries are
adapting
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adopting
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 it as their first or second
language
 to be united
to
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 other nations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalized education
  • Access to education
  • High-quality institutions
  • Career opportunities
  • Proficiency
  • Prerequisite
  • Cultural immersion
  • Language skills
  • Global network
  • Technological advancements
  • Scientific research
  • Academic resources
  • Comprehensive
  • Personal development
  • Independence
  • Immersion
  • Employment prospects
  • Academic exposure
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