The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart displays
an
usual expenditure by each family per week, commencing 1968 to 2018. Correct article usage
the
Overall
, in both years, the majority of families spent their wages on food and residential sectors, compared to the gas need which was being
the least among the others.
In 1968, most of the Unnecessary verb
apply
the
households used their funds for food supplies with figures Remove the redundancy
apply
just
over one-third. In Change preposition
of just
comparasion
, they Correct your spelling
comparison
were
seemingly only spent around 7% of their Unnecessary verb
apply
the
wages Correct article usage
apply
in
fuel and power needs. Change preposition
on
On the other hand
, the necessity for the primer goods in each family was approximately at
10%, followed by Change preposition
apply
the next expenditures rate
which was slightly lower than the primer was the need for some enjoyments. With percentages almost around 8%, transport, home Change to a genitive case
the rate of the next expenditure
equipments
, and personal needs were Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
being
the second least.
Fifty Unnecessary verb
apply
year
later, many households switched their highest spending on leisure time with figures increased by about 15% than previously. Housing and meal categories being the next spending, reached almost 20% and 18% respectively. Not only the increased money to fulfil their spare time, the transport part Change to a plural noun
years
also
surged by about 7%. Three other categories which were collapsed during this
period of time were clothing, gas, and personal necessities, all were under 5%. Meanwhile, the only sector remained
static was Correct pronoun usage
that remained
households
goods.Change the noun form
household
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