Many people consider celebrities such as actors and athletes to be their role models. Do you think that people should look up to celebrities as role models? What other types of people are worthy of admiration?

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most

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celebrities

such

as actors and

athletes

could be their

role

models

. It's fine if the

role

models

give them a good or positive example.

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role

models

due to

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talent. If we can able to emulate their positive characteristics

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fine to make them

role

models

.

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with, some

celebrities

and

athletes

could

inspiring

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inspire

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individuals to

persue

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pursue

their

dream

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and work hard. We should

to

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bring those

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to

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our

live

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, that way

celebrities

and

athletes

can be able to

being

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role

models

.

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,

celebrities

would

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share their daily life.

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to

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watch

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Youtube

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chanel

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when we need

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to

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some motivation or something we need from their

role

models

.

Furthermore

,

celebrities

and

athletes

are involved in humanitarian efforts,

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as

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some

people

to get help and preventing crime

for

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occurring.

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,

celelebrities

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celebrities

advocating

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for important causes and

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their platform for social change. As we know most

people

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smartphone

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to

doing

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something they need or want.

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to

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read

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using their smartphone and even if they would like to watch some movies they could do it

while

doing other activities. But as we know it is only for social media consumption.

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not able to believe

celebrities

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celebrities'

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or

athletes

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life. In conclusion,

people

should

also

admire everyday heroes,

such

as

teacher

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teachers

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and healthcare workers. And

also

community leaders who make a tangible difference in

ther

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their

lives. Parental assistance

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here to serve as the most immediate and

infulential

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influential

role

models

due to

their direct impact on an

individuals

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development and values.