The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.

The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.
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The table provides data about the
proportion
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of
income
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spent on
food
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, electronic
equipment
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,
music
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and videos in the United Kingdom in 1998.
Overall
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,
adults
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,
men
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and
women
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spent the highest
proportion
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of
income
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on
food
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whereas
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children
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,
boys
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and
girls
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spent the highest
proportion
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of
income
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on
music
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. As can be seen,
adults
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,
men
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and
women
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spent the highest
proportion
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of
income
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on
food
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. The
proportion
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of
income
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spent on
food
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by
women
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was 35 per
cent
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whereas
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adults
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spent 25 per
cent
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and
men
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only 14 per
cent
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. The
proportion
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of
income
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spent on electronic
equipment
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by
men
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was 10 per
cent
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while
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adults
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spent 5 per
cent
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and
women
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spent only 1 per
cent
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. The percentage of
income
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spent on
music
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was the same for
men
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,
women
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and
adults
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(5 per
cent
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). The lowest
proportion
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of
income
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by
adults
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men
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and
women
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was spent on videos. The highest
proportion
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of
income
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on
music
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was spent by
children
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,
boys
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and
girls
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.
Boys
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spent 38 per
cent
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,
children
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39 and
girls
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40 per
cent
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. Both
children
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(10 per
cent
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) and
boys
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(9 per
cent
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) spent the least
proportion
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of
income
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on
food
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,
whereas
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girls
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spent the least
proportion
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of
income
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on electronic
equipment
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.
Girls
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spent only 5 per
cent
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on electronic
equipment
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, income, food, equipment, music, adults, men, women, children, boys, girls, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 10 times.
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