The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first diagram illustrates the process of
cement
manufacture, and the second diagram shows the Use synonyms
materials
that go into the Use synonyms
production
of concrete.
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It is clear that
there are five stages in the Linking Words
production
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cement
, beginning with the input of raw Use synonyms
materials
and ending with bags of the finished product. To produce concrete, four different Use synonyms
materials
are mixed together.
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At the first stage
in the Linking Words
production
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cement
, limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder. Use synonyms
This
powder is Linking Words
then
mixed before it passes into a rotating heater. After heating, the resulting mixture is ground, and Linking Words
cement
is produced. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
cement
is packaged in large bags.
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Cement
is one of the four raw Use synonyms
materials
that are used in the Use synonyms
production
of concrete, Use synonyms
along with
gravel, sand and water. To be exact, concrete consists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% Linking Words
cement
and 10% water. All four Use synonyms
materials
are blended together in a rotating machine called a concrete mixer.Use synonyms
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