The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate the
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center
of a tiny Change the spelling
centre
town
named Use synonyms
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lslip
as it is now, and plans for its expansion.
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slip
Islip
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lslip
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that lslip
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town
significantly Capitalize word
Town
change
and Wrong verb form
changed
plan
to develop and will Correct subject-verb agreement
plans
be
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apply
construction
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construct
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a Road
town
, new housing, Use synonyms
shopping
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a shopping
center
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bus
station car park…, Correct article usage
a bus
while
some places and buildings stay and Linking Words
do
not Verb problem
are
demolish
.
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demolished
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lslip
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Islip
slip
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town
,Capitalize word
Town
first
construction and Correct article usage
the first
extend
houses in Replace the word
extension
west
of south and east of north Add an article
the west
the
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of the
town
.After that, build new housing near the car park.Use synonyms
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a pedestrians
only between shops and Correct the article-noun agreement
pedestrians
a pedestrian
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the shopping
shopping
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the shopping
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center
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centre
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will be Change the spelling
centre
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built
build
a bus station and a car park.Wrong verb form
built
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school
, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
park
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parks
shops
in Correct word choice
and shops
middle
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the middle
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the lslip
lslip
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Islip
slip
town
and housing from Use synonyms
south
remain and Correct article usage
the south
transforms
a little.Correct subject-verb agreement
transform
all
in all the Capitalize word
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lslip
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slip
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town
plans Use synonyms
development
extend and will be Change preposition
for development
costruction
modern places and facilities.Correct your spelling
construction
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