The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The visual illustration depicts a Norbiton industrial area now compared to its planned future development.
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, a noticeable change is witnessed in the establishment of public services
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school, a playground, shops, and a medical centre- alongside the knocking down of factories, replaced by housing.
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, a road extension crossed the river is forecasted to happen in the future, building more housing. Regarding the maps, an industrial area in Norbiton is currently dominated by factories which have a roundabout in the centre. To the north of that space, farmland exists separated by a river.
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, the projection demonstrates the demolishing of factory buildings
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and reallocating of them into housing. In the future plan,
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the housing, a school will be built in the east, followed by a playground next to the west. The shops are predicted to be available in the southwest of the circle, as opposed to a medical centre, adjacent to a new small circle that will be created in the main road.
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, the development of housing
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the population will reach the farmland
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the street extension,
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the addition of a junction in the northwest area which is very populated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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