Some people believe that touristsdo not learn anything during their holidays, while others believe that they learn a lot. Discuss both sides .

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Nowadays, it is

lot

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a lot

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easier to travel.

Due to

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the development of technology and infrastructure, the number of

visitors

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are

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increasing rapidly in every

spots

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spot

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. It is argued that

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apply

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tourist

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tourists

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learn nothing

while

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they are on vacation,

while

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others think that gain a lot.

This

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essay agrees that, in terms of learning perspective, individuals

aquire

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acquire

a lot from their vacation.

Holidays

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offer

wide

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a wide

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range of knowledge towards

visitors

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, which

consider

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is considered

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Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

250 words

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Some people believe that touristsdo not learn anything during their holidays, while others believe that they learn a lot. Discuss both sides .

Your opinion

There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food. Yet this is necessary if we are to meet the demands often increasing world population. Give your opinions on this.

The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle this.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities ,so the population in the country side is decreasing. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

Some people think that younger people are not suitable for important positions in government. Others think that it will be a good idea for younger people to take on these positions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.