The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graph depicts four factors
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that contributed
contributed
to global Wrong verb form
contribute
soil
erosion.The table represents the impact of those four factors on three areas namely North America,Use synonyms
Europe
and Oceania.
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Overall
,four main contributors are logging the trees, over-grazing, overplanting crops and Linking Words
other
. One more Fix the agreement mistake
others
Europe
's fields were Use synonyms
partucularly
affected as a Correct your spelling
particularly
results
of those treatments.
Over one-third of all causes Correct the article-noun agreement
result
was
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were
due to
feeding farm animals Linking Words
and
30% Correct word choice
apply
was
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were
brought up
by cutting down Verb problem
caused
the
trees and almost the same proportion was because of intensive cultivation of crops and other causes composed 7%.
Only 5% of total Correct article usage
apply
soil
in North America was Use synonyms
erosed
by deforestation, Correct your spelling
erased
eroded
over grasing
and Correct your spelling
over-grazing
overcultivation
with the figures 0.2%,1.5% and 3.3% Correct your spelling
over-cultivation
over cultivation
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accordingly
.Rephrase
respectively
While
in islands of Linking Words
Pacific
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the Pacific
ocean
,Australia and New Capitalize word
Ocean
Zeland
cutting down the forests and farm animals contributed Correct your spelling
Zealand
1.7
% and 11.3% respectively Change preposition
to 1.7
and
degradation.Interestingly overcropping had no effect on Correct word choice
apply
soil
erosion.In Use synonyms
Europe
where land was especially affected deforestation turned most of the land unproductive with Use synonyms
percentage
of 9.8% and almost Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
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a quater
quater
of Correct your spelling
quarter
whole
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the whole
soil
in Use synonyms
Europe
was affected by these factors where Use synonyms
overgazing
contributed to 5.5% and overfarming to 7.7%.Correct your spelling
overgrazing
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words soil, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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