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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie graph depicts four factors
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contributed
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 to global
soil
 erosion.The table represents the impact of those four factors on three areas namely North America,
Europe
 and Oceania.
Overall
,four main contributors are logging the trees, over-grazing, overplanting crops and
other
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others
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. One more
Europe
's fields were
partucularly
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particularly
 affected as a
results
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result
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 of those treatments. Over one-third of all causes
was
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were
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due to
 feeding farm animals
and
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30%
was
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were
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brought up
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caused
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 by cutting down
the
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trees and almost the same proportion was because of intensive cultivation of crops and other causes composed 7%. Only 5% of total
soil
 in North America was
erosed
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erased
eroded
 by deforestation,
over grasing
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over-grazing
 and
overcultivation
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over-cultivation
over cultivation
 with the figures 0.2%,1.5% and 3.3%
accordingly
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respectively
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.
While
 in islands of
Pacific
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the Pacific
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ocean
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Ocean
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,Australia and New
Zeland
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Zealand
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 cutting down the forests and farm animals contributed
1.7
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% and 11.3% respectively
and
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apply
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degradation.Interestingly overcropping had no effect on
soil
 erosion.In
Europe
 where land was especially affected deforestation turned most of the land unproductive with
percentage
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the percentage
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 of 9.8% and almost
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a quater
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quater
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quarter
 of
whole
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the whole
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soil
 in
Europe
 was affected by these factors where
overgazing
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overgrazing
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 contributed to 5.5% and overfarming to 7.7%.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words soil, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pie chart
  • Table
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Decreasing productivity
  • Reasons
  • Regional variations
  • Data
  • Summarize
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